Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Three years ago, I became a student in an ordinary school． Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient and considerate． However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class． I decided to make the best for it． I worked hardly and got along well with teachers and classmates． Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available． Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated．

My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determine who you are．

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 disappointing—disappointed

 find—found

 However—Besides或Also

 for—of

 hardly—hard

 teachers 前加my或the

 student—students

 what—which

 去掉but后的that

 determine—determines

【解析】

 disappointing修飾某事  disappointed修飾某人

 文章開頭Three years ago所以應是過去時

 however但是  此處不存在轉折關系。而是與前面的表示并列

 固定搭配make the best of  好好利用

 hard的形容詞 副詞 相同，均為hard   而hardly表示幾乎不

 老師應是特制的 故要加my或the

 one of 后面要用復數  表示 。。。之一

 非限制性定語從句。從句中缺主語，關系代詞不能用what，用which

 but后已經是一個完整的句子，不用加that

 it后的that指代it 故從句中要用第三人稱單數。