Question

　

第三部分：寫作(共兩節(jié),滿分35分)　　

第一節(jié)    短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)

請對每一行作出判斷，如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上劃一個√，如有錯誤，按照改錯的方法改，請將答案寫在答題卡上。

Once an old man saw a bag on his way to home.                             76. _______

    In the bag there was a wolf. It was catching and put in                 77. _______

    the bag by a shepherd（牧羊人） a few minutes ago.

    The wolf asked the old man to let him out.                                 78. _______

    The old man took pity on him and opened bag.                             79. _______

    When the wolf got out， said to the old man， "I am very hungry.  80. _______

    I want to eat you." The other old man could do nothing                  81. _______

    and cry for help. Just then the shepherd came and saw this.            82. _______

    He beat the wolf to death by a stick. Then he said to the                83. _______

    old man， "wolves want to eat men all the time. It's nature            84. _______

    will never change. We should took this as a good lesson."              85. ______　　

Answer 1

  76 刪去to.home是副詞， 前面不能接介詞。　　

    77. catching改為caught.主語it與catch的關系為被動關系,故用was caught.　　

    78. 此行無錯。　　

    79. bag前加the.bag在此重復提到， 為特指。　　

    80. said前加he.代詞漏用錯誤。此句缺少主語,并且要與上文him保持一致。　　

    81. 刪去other.接上下文沒有"另一個老人".　　

    82. and（cry）改為but（cry）。can do nothing but意為"只得做"，為習慣搭配。　　

    83. by改為with.介詞錯誤。"用……工具"常用"with……".　　

    84. It's改為Its.同音詞混淆錯誤。此處應為"它的本性".　　

    85. took改為take.情態(tài)動詞后應接動詞原形。