Question

短文改錯

　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　 　　

I felt sadly yesterday when our teacher told us something	(1)______
about the Project Hope（希望工程）in class. It has set up to help the	(2)______
children in the countryside who can’t pay to go to	(3)______
school. After school I came home. I was wondering if	(4)______
I could do something for the Project then I caught sight	(5)______
of money-collecting box on the table. Then I made	(6)______
up my minds to send my pocket money which I had	(7)______
saved for almost one year to the children who	(8)______
wanted to go to school. I wrote a letter to them and	(9)______
hurried to the post office. Together with the letter I posted the money and sent with my best wishes to them.	(10)______

Answer 1

答案：略
解析：

(1) sadly改為sad。形容詞、副詞詞性混淆錯誤。feel意為“感到”，連系動詞后接形容詞作表語。(2) has后加been。動詞錯誤。it指代the Project Hope，謂語動詞應該用被動語態。(3) pay改為afford。動詞錯誤。pay...to do sth．意為“為做某事付款/給錢”，而這里指孩子們不能支付上學的費用。afford更準確。(4) 正確。(5) then改為when。連詞錯誤。when在這里是并列連詞，意為“正在此時，就在這時”，它連接兩個并列分句，相當于and then或and at that time。(6) of后加the或my。限定詞錯誤。此處表示特指。(7) minds改為mind。名詞錯誤。make up one’s mind為固定短語，意為“下定決心”。8。almost改為nearly。副詞錯誤。almost和nearly兩個詞都含有“差不多，幾乎”的意思，但放在具體數字前時，常用nearly，而不用almost。(9) wanted改為want。動詞錯誤。孩子們想上學的心情是一種客觀事實，用一般現在時比較好。(10) 去掉with。介詞錯誤send在這里表“傳，寄，送”，是及物動詞，with為多余。