Question

VIII．寫作（滿分20分）
【寫作內容】請根據以下提示，寫一篇英語短文。      
1、我們經常在公共場合見到各種不道德的行為，敘述你的一次相關經歷。 
2、這些不文明的行為會有哪些影響。 
3、我們應該怎樣改善這種現象。 
【寫作要求】
詞數120左右。開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；可使用自己的親身經歷或虛構的故事；
語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。使用以下要求的句型和結構的至少4種：1）名詞性從句、2）定語從句、3）非謂語作狀語或定語或主語或賓語、4）1個S+V+O+OC（賓補）的句型、5）并列句。
Immoral Behavior in Public
To witness immoral behavior in public, one need only to visit ________....

Answer 1

One possible version:          
Immoral Behavior in Public
To witness immoral behavior in public, one need only to visit the subway. I still remember the first time I took the subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but few were in the line.
Immoral behaviors in public cause a series of problems. One is that it may have a negative effect on our sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we will be disrespected some day too.
The improvement of this phenomenon is certainly not easy. I propose that society make it clear that people who fail to respect the common good will be seriously punished. And stricter policies should be made to correct it as soon as possible.

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