Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（/\），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第十一處起）不計(jì)分。
It was 2:10 in the afternoon when I entered the classroom. I was surprising to see our teacher operating the video camera. Most of us have never been in front of a video camera before, but we were very nervous. As for myself, I had once faced it at home. My uncle shot as we were celebrating for my sister’s birthday. However, this was complete different. We had to talk about our articles as if we were reading news on TV. The funny thing was every time I tried to face the cameras and talked about my article, I forgot the article and couldn’t help look down at it. It was quite a different experience for me, thanks to our teacher.

Answer 1

It was 2:10 in the afternoon when I entered the classroom. I was surprising to see our
surprised（表示驚訝的）
teacher operating the video camera. Most of us have never been in front of a video camera
a (操作一臺攝像機(jī)）          had（根據(jù)上下文可知，過去時(shí)）
before, but we were very nervous. As for myself, I had once faced it at home.
so （上下文，因?yàn)闆]有在攝像機(jī)前面過，所以很緊張）
one（泛指，一臺）
My uncle shot as                                                       

 
we were celebrating for my sister’s birthday. However, this was complete different. We had to
completely（修飾different用副詞）
talk about our articles as if we were reading news on TV. The funny thing was
/\ every time I
That（表語從句，that不可省略）
tried to face the cameras and talked about my article, I forgot the article and
camera （指那臺攝像機(jī)）
couldn’t help look
Looking（can't help doing sth)
down at it. It was a quite different experience for me, thanks to our teacher.

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