Question

假如你叫李平，你的美國(guó)筆友Tom來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你十一假期過(guò)的怎樣。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中的信息給他回信，說(shuō)明你在十一假期中的活動(dòng)和理由。

活動(dòng)	理由
休息	學(xué)習(xí)緊張，缺少鍛煉和休息
看望鄉(xiāng)下的祖父母	幫助他們做點(diǎn)家務(wù)，并給他們談了身邊的新鮮事
和朋友進(jìn)行短途旅游	欣賞大自然，呼吸新鮮空氣

注意：詞數(shù)100左右。

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to receive your letter. And it’s a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday.
First, I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise. Of course, it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends. What’s more, I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air. What did you do in your summer holidays? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping

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