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第二節(jié)讀寫任務(wù) (共1小題,滿分25分)
閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
It seemed no one cared about Steve, a twelve-year-old boy with alcoholic(酗酒) parents. In spite of his reading skills, he had been failing exams since first grade. Steve went unnoticed until Miss White.
　　Miss White was a smiling, young, beautiful redhead, and Steve was in love! For the first time in his young life, he couldn’t take his eyes off his teacher; yet, still he failed. He never did his homework, and he was always in trouble with Miss White. His heart would break under her sharp words, and when he was punished for failing to turn in his homework, he felt just miserable! Still, he did not study.
　　Until one day, Miss White talked to him, “Steve! Please! I care about you!”
Suddenly, Steve understood! Someone cared about him!
From that moment nothing was the same for Steve. Life at home remained the same, but life still changed. He discovered that not only could he learn, but he was good at it!
After high-school Steve joined the Navy, and he had a successful military career. During that time, he met the love of his life, he raised a family, and he graduated from a college. Later he became a professor in a nearby college
　　You see, it’s simple, really. A change took place within the heart of one boy, all because of one teacher, who cared.
[寫作內(nèi)容]
有一英國網(wǎng)站正在征集以“My Teachers and Me”為主題的故事，請按以下要求寫一篇發(fā)生在你與你的老師之間的故事：
1) 以約30個詞概括短文的要點；
2) 然后以約120個詞寫一篇記敘文，并包括如下要點：
①敘述你老師對你影響深遠的真實或虛構(gòu)的故事；
②你遇到問題時，你的老師如何幫你解決；
③你的老師對你產(chǎn)生了什么影響？
[寫作要求] 可以參照閱讀材料的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，組織故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
[評分標準] 概括準確、語言規(guī)范、內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

Steve wasn’t interested in studying because he believed no one cared about him until he met Miss White. It was her care instead of her criticism and punishment that changed Steve’s whole life.
This reminded me of my mathematics teacher Mr. Zhang, one that I particularly liked and respected in my junior school years.
I was doing poorly in mathematics at that time. As a result, I was always feeling down. However, after each test, Mr. Zhang would always announce in class that I had made some progress. Of course, every time I would feel a little embarrassed, and pleased too. And I would make up my mind to work harder in future in order not to disappoint my teacher. So, after one year, I really made amazing progress in that subject. It was Mr. Zhang’s praise that helped me make it. His encouragement changed my life at school and will influence me all my life. I’ve come to realize that I can do anything well as long as I don’t lose heart.

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