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閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
Beijing, Oct. 2, 2008 --- Tourist destinations around the country had at least 4.05 million visitors, up 33.4 percent year-on-year, during the first four days of the week-long national holiday.
The tourism revenue(財(cái)政收入) jumped 37.5 percent year-on-year.
This year’s “golden week” National Day holiday runs from Sept. 29 to Oct.5. In previous years, the seven-day holiday kicked off on Oct. 1.
Beijing had a visitor increase of more than 60 percent, with many tourists drawn to see the Olympic venues(場(chǎng)所).
About 920,000 people, up 62 percent year-on-year, visited 21 major tourist sites in Beijing, according to figures released by the office.
The must-see Forbidden City welcomed 120,000 visitors, up 140 percent.
Shanghai saw a 52.2-percent rise in the number of tourists at more than 70 sites.
In Sichuan province, about 107,400 people, an increase of 360 percent from last year, visited the ancient town of Huanglongxi near Chengdu.
Chinese trains carried more than 5.4 million passengers on Wednesday alone, an increase of almost 13 percent. About 557, 300 people traveled by air and 53.2 million people hit the roads on the same day.
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從2008年起，國(guó)家調(diào)整了假日設(shè)置，五一黃金周被取消，增加了傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日的休假，對(duì)此人們?cè)u(píng)價(jià)不一。在今年國(guó)慶前，網(wǎng)上流傳一些專家和機(jī)構(gòu)的說(shuō)法，國(guó)家將會(huì)在近期取消“十一”黃金周，又引起了各種反響。請(qǐng)你對(duì)此現(xiàn)象發(fā)表意見(jiàn)。
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以約30個(gè)詞概括新聞報(bào)道；
用約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：
支持者意見(jiàn)：雖然縮短了“五一”長(zhǎng)假，但增加了三個(gè)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，有利于提高傳統(tǒng)文化意識(shí)，減輕了旅游地的接待壓力，增加了親人團(tuán)聚的機(jī)會(huì)．．．．．．
反對(duì)者意見(jiàn)：會(huì)導(dǎo)致長(zhǎng)假期間的交通更加擁擠，減少了遠(yuǎn)方的人員回家探親的機(jī)會(huì)．．．．．．
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Answer 1

The report narrates that during the “golden week” in 2008, the number of tourists in cities like Beijing increased dramatically, which contributed to a higher tourism revenue and heavier traffic.
Recently, the government announced that the “golden week” would be suspended, which caused different reactions. Some people think although the long “golden week” will be cancelled, we will have other traditional holidays like Mid-autumn holiday in return. Our time for relaxation is just divided into several parts while the total is not less than before. Besides, the traditional holidays can improve our sense of traditional culture and shorter holiday can ease the reception stress of tourist attractions and increase the chance of family reunion. Other people argue that “golden week” shouldn’t be suspended, for shorter holidays can make the traffic worse, which can decrease the chance of reunion of distant family members.
From my point of view, such change will do more good than harm for the simple reason that enjoying our traditional holiday can help us have a better understanding of our customs and thus rebuild our confidence in our own culture.

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