Question

This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boyin her arms. In front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be sleeping. I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man. Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “Be quiet. This uncle must very tired because of hard work.” The young man must haveheard the word. His face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at once.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 去掉a

 Besides→Beside

 held→holding

 occupies →occupied

 curious→curiously

  if →that或去掉if

 her →my

 must 和 very 之間加be.

 words→words

 for → to

【解析】

試題分析：本文敘述了作者在一次在公交車上看見的一幕，車上人多,有許多人由于沒有座位而站著，而在作者的前面有一個婦女抱著一個小男孩，小男孩看見了一位年輕的男士一個人占著兩個座位在那里裝睡，當(dāng)這位年輕人聽到這位婦女說這位叔叔是由于太勤苦太勞累了，他于是就主動把座位讓給了這位婦女。

 by+表交通工具的名詞是固定用法。表交通工具的名詞前不用冠詞。  所以bus前也不用冠詞。

 Besides意為：而且；Beside 意為：在......的旁邊。在此應(yīng)該理解為：在我的旁邊有.......。

 there be +名詞做主語，主謂結(jié)構(gòu)完整。holding a little boy是現(xiàn)在分詞短語作后置定語。表示和woman 是邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系。意為：有一個抱小孩的婦女。

 在In front of her, a young man occupies two seats,中 occupies作謂語，應(yīng)該和整篇文章的時態(tài)保持一致。全文都是過去時，這里也應(yīng)該用動詞的過去式形式。

 在英語中習(xí)慣用副詞修飾動詞，所以要用curiously 來修飾 heard。

 分析句子： I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man. 看到  thought后是一個賓語從句，在賓語從句中if 意為是否，而這里不需要，故去掉或者改為that也可以，that作賓語可以省略。

 Beyond... expectations,  根據(jù)上下文判斷，應(yīng)該是出乎我的預(yù)料，而不是她的。

 must be very tired，表示肯定推測，一定很累。must是情態(tài)動詞，后要求用動詞原形而tired 是形容詞，所以需要加be動詞符合英語的習(xí)慣。

 word 是不可數(shù)名詞，消息；words 是可數(shù)名詞，那些話。結(jié)合語境，應(yīng)該是年輕人聽到了那些話更合適。

 offer sth to sb 是固定搭配，意思是：提供某事給某人。

考點：短文改錯。