Question

第二節(jié) 書面表達(滿分25分)
假設(shè)你叫李華，你的英國筆友Jane給你寫了一封信，訴說她的煩惱。請根據(jù)信的內(nèi)容寫封回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．對信中提及的問題表示理解；
2．鼓勵Jane以積極的態(tài)度面對生活中遇到的困難。
注意：   
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Li Hua,
I'm very worried. In school, I am not popular at all. I don't know why. Perhaps this is because I am too shy. I want to change myself to be open and sunny, but I never accomplish this. I always feel lonely at school. I am sort of thinking I had better leave school. Can you help me? Can you tell me what to do?
Yours,
Jane
Dear Jane,
Thank you for your trust.
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Meanwhile, if you get lonely, write a letter to me. I'm always here for you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version                                                      
Dear Jane,
Thank you for your trust. I can understand you quite a lot. But I don’t think you should really have to do anything special. You just try to treat others the way you would like to be treated. In other words, be friendly towards them, try to help them if they have a problem. If you do this, friends will come to you. After all, making friends and getting along with other people is another lesson you are learning.
Still, leaving school is not a good choice and you probably couldn’t do it even if you wanted to. It’s unnecessary to try to adapt yourself to something you think others want. Just be kind and helpful when you can, get good marks and try not to worry.
Meanwhile, if you get lonely, write a letter to me. I’m always here for you.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

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