Question

11．假設你是李華，在你校留學的意大利女孩Sara對端午節很感興趣，計劃端午節期間到宜昌旅游，了解宜昌的端午節文化．她寫信向你咨詢相關事宜．請根據以下提示，用英語給她回一封電子郵件．
內容包括：1．端午節的時間和起源；
2．主要的慶�；顒有问�；
3．建議品嘗粽子和觀看龍舟賽．
注意：1．詞數100左右；
2．開頭和結尾已給出．
3．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：端午節Dragon Boat Festival；   粽子zongzi；
投江drown oneself in a river；   糯米glutinous rice
Dear Sara，
Knowing that you are interested in the Dragon Boat Festival in Yichang，
I am writing to tell you about it and give you some advice．
The Dragon Boat Festival，which falls on May 5that lunar calendar，is an important Chinese festival in memory of a great poet named Qu Yuan．It is said that Qu Yan committed suicide by drowning himself in the Miluo River．Knowing him to be a good man，local people rowed boats along the river in search of him（高分句型一）．They also threw rice into the river to feed the fish so that they would not eat Qu's body．That's why Chinese people celebrate the festival by eating Zongzi and holding dragon boat competitions．
Zongzi is a kind of dumpling made of glutinous rice with meat and eggs inside．The most famous Zongzi in Hainan are those made in Danzhou City and Ding'an County．I suggest you try some．I also recommend that you watch the grand dragon boat competition in Chengmai County（高分句型二）．It is one of the most exciting competitions across Hainan．You won't forget it．
Wish you a pleasant journey in Yichang．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等 
高分句型一：
Knowing him to be a good man，local people rowed boats along the river in search of him． 
因為了解他是一個很好的人，地方上的人劃著船沿著河流尋找他． 
高分句型二：
I also recommend that you watch the grand dragon boat competition in Chengmai County． 
我也建議你在澄邁縣觀看盛大的龍舟比賽．

解答 Dear Sara，
       Knowing that your are interested in the Dragon Boat Festival in Hainan，I am writing to tell you about it and give you some advice． 
       The Dragon Boat Festival，which falls on May 5 th at lunar calendar，is an important Chinese festival in memory of a great poet named Qu Yuan．It is said that Qu Yan committed suicide by drowning himself in the Miluo River．Knowing him to be a good man，local people rowed boats along the river in search of him（高分句型一）．They also threw rice into the river to feed the fish so that they would not eat Qu's body．That's why Chinese people celebrate the festival by eating Zongzi and holding dragon boat competitions． 
       Zongzi is a kind of dumpling made of glutinous rice with meat and eggs inside．The most famous Zongzi in Hainan are those made in Danzhou City and Ding'an County．I suggest you try some．I also recommend that you watch the grand dragon boat competition in Chengmai County（高分句型二）．It is one of the most exciting competitions across Hainan．You won't forget it． 
       Wish you a pleasant journey around Hainan． 
                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．