Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：
1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Dear Fangfang,
I’m sorry to learn that you were not getting on well with your English study recently．I’d like to give you some advice on learning English．
First of all, you should be confidently in yourself, which is first step in learning English well．Secondly, you’d better make friends with the students who are good at English, so they are very likely to helping you when you meet difficulties．Thirdly, learning English well is a long process．Remember: to reward yourself when you have made progress, that will inspire you greatly．Anyway, you must work hard on English and never give up learning it．Just believe in yourselves．Where there is a will, there is a way．
Hope my suggestions will give you some of help．
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Fangfang,
I’m sorry to learn that you were not getting on well with your English study recently．I’d like
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to give you some advice on learning English．
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well．Secondly, you’d better make friends with the students who are good at English, so ∧ they
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are very likely to helping you when you meet difficulties．Thirdly, learning English well is a long
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process．Remember: to reward yourself when you have made progress, that will inspire you
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greatly．Anyway, you must work hard on English and never give up learning it．Just believe in
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yourselves．Where there is a will, there is a way．
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Hope my suggestions will give you some of help．
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

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