Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題l分，滿分10分)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

It is clear shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems. 68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won’t obey our parents or teachers. Personally, I think we student should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without sound body, one can’t achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework or more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.

Answer 1

【答案】

It is shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems. 68% of the students have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight . And a larger percentage sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won’t obey parents or teachers. Personally, I think we should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without a sound body, one can’t achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only studies. As a result, I suggest we given less homework more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.

【解析】

第一處：clear→clearly。詞性錯(cuò)誤。此處修飾過(guò)去分詞shown，要用副詞clearly＂清晰地＂。

第二處：surveying→surveyed。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤。本句中的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是have，故students后應(yīng)是分詞作后置定語(yǔ)，survey與所修飾的students構(gòu)成被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用過(guò)去分詞。

第三處：去掉too。副詞多用。句中已經(jīng)有as well as表示＂也＂了，故句尾的too是多余的。

第四處：lacks→lack。主謂一致錯(cuò)誤。percentage作主語(yǔ)時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)與它所修飾的名詞或指代的名詞一致。此處指學(xué)生，所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)。

第五處：our→their。代詞錯(cuò)誤。42%的學(xué)生不聽(tīng)他們父母和老師的話。主語(yǔ)是42% of the students，是第三人稱(chēng)，故此處形容詞性物主代詞用their。

第六處：student→students。名詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤。we后面的名詞是其同位語(yǔ)，所以用student的復(fù)數(shù)形式以與we一致。

第七處：Without后加a。冠詞漏用。body是可數(shù)名詞，且此處泛指一個(gè)好的身體，故加冠詞a。

第八處：on→to。介詞錯(cuò)誤。pay attention to＂注意……＂是固定搭配，此處用的是該短語(yǔ)的被動(dòng)形式。

第九處：are→be。虛擬語(yǔ)氣錯(cuò)誤。suggest在此處表示＂建議＂，因此后跟的賓語(yǔ)從句應(yīng)用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，即從句謂語(yǔ)用＂should+do＂形式，且should可以省略。故此處應(yīng)把a(bǔ)re改為be。

第十處：or→and。連詞錯(cuò)誤。我建議我們應(yīng)該少被布置點(diǎn)作業(yè)，多些時(shí)間進(jìn)行課外活動(dòng)。本句是肯定句，此處不表示選擇意義，而指的是并列的兩個(gè)名詞，表示＂及＂，應(yīng)用and。