Question

【題目】（三）

假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華，針對校園內一些不文明現象，你班開展了主題活動，請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，為校刊“英語園地”寫一篇短文，記述你和同學參與活動的全過程。

注意：1. 詞數不少于60；

2. 短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

Recently, I noticed something unpleasent in our school.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Chris,

Recently, I noticed something unpleasent in our school. Some students littered freely while cleaners took pains to sweep the floor. To fight such bad bahaviors, our calss held a meeting themed ―To care about our environment, start from

ourselves. We discussed heatedly before we agreed on one solution. From the next day on, we were split into groups to collect rubbish every morning before class. Our deed got a thumb up from our teacher. He said we served as an example for the students to help keep the school clean. We also felt it meaningful to shoulder our responsibility for the environment around us.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達是一篇圖片作文。圖畫作文寫作的時候注意以下幾點：1、仔細審圖并且注意有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱范圍內進行分析、構思和想象。要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；語言表達要符合英語習慣。4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡潔明了，而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如To fight such bad bahaviors, our calss held a meeting themed用到了不定式。It作形式主語的句子We also felt it meaningful to shoulder our responsibility for the environment around us.