Question

【題目】 短文改錯（每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(/)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

My little cousin is greatly interested on science. And he does some dangerous experiments sometime. Although his parents want to encourage him to be great scientist, at times they worry about his safety. Last week, when my cousin was doing an experiment, he hurts his thumb. My aunt felt sadly and wanted him to stop from doing that experiment. However, my cousin didn’t want to give up. She said, ＂Many scientists got hurt when they were doing experiments, so they didn’t give up.＂ My aunt had to let him finish the experiments and he finally succeeded in finish it.

Answer 1

【答案】

My little cousin is greatly interested science. And he does some dangerous experiments . Although his parents want to encourage him to be great scientist, at times they worry about his safety. Last week, when my cousin was doing an experiment, he his thumb. My aunt felt and wanted him to stop doing that experiment. However, my cousin didn’t want to give up. said, ＂Many scientists got hurt when they were doing experiments, they didn’t give up.＂ My aunt had to let him finish the and he finally succeeded in it.

【解析】

第一處：on→in be interested in sth.為固定用法，表示＂對……感興趣＂。

第二處：sometime→sometimes 此處表示＂有時(shí)，不時(shí)，間或＂，應(yīng)用sometimes；sometime作狀語時(shí)，表示＂在(將來或過去的)某個時(shí)候＂。

第三處：在great前加a 此處泛指成為＂一名杰出的科學(xué)家＂，scientist為可數(shù)名詞，故應(yīng)用不定冠詞限定。

第四處：hurts→hurt 根據(jù)Last week可知，本句描述的是過去發(fā)生的事件，故謂語動詞應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。

第五處：sadly→sad feel是系動詞，后跟形容詞作表語，而sadly為副詞，應(yīng)用形容詞sad。

第六處：刪掉stop后的from stop doing sth表示＂停止做某事＂，為固定搭配。

第七處：She→He 該處的人稱代詞指的是my cousin，前文都用he來指代，故此處要與前文保持一致。

第八處：so→but 此處表示：許多科學(xué)家在做實(shí)驗(yàn)的時(shí)候都受傷了，但他們并未放棄。前后為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用but。

第九處：experiments→experiment 此處指＂讓他完成那個實(shí)驗(yàn)＂，為單數(shù)。

第十處：finish→finishing 介詞的賓語應(yīng)為名詞、代詞或動名詞因此此處應(yīng)用動名詞作介詞in的賓語。