Question

【題目】（十八）

根據圖畫，寫一篇英語短文，描述今昔通訊方式的變化，以及這些變化給人們生活帶來的影響。

注意：

1．詞數：不少于120字

2．生詞：通訊：communicate(with sb．)vi. communication （n．） 互聯網：the Internet

Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years.

In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone. People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.

With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different continents. In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇書面表達是一篇看圖寫文章,屬開放式作文。根據圖畫，寫一篇英語短文，描述今昔通訊方式的變化，以及這些變化給人們生活帶來的影響。首先要理解圖畫的含義，然后用流暢的語言表達出來。可根據圖畫適當增加細節，寫作時要注意準確運用時態、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、句式，避免都寫成簡單句，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色。注意要求的字數不少于120字，不要太多或太少。

【亮點說明】Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years.

在文章第一句就運用了一個現在完成時態的句子，且take place 無被動語態。What’s more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like. 此句包含了一個which引導的非限制性定語從句。With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficient.這是一個并列句，and將兩個現在完成時態的被動語態連在一起。It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different continents.這個句子包含了一個even if引導的讓步狀語從句。In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.本句運用了形容詞比較級。另外文中還運用了下面的高級詞匯、短語：kept in touch with；communicate with；

What’s more；quicken；hear from；In a word。