Question

【題目】下圖是學校英語網站的新增部分欄目，網站負責人Mr. Black就此向同學們征詢意見。假如你是李華，請你根據以下提示用英語給Mr. Black寫一封電子郵件。

主要內容包括：

1. 你建議增加的一個欄目及理由，

2. 你對英語網站的建議。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 開頭和結尾己給出，不計入總詞數；

3. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

參考詞匯：欄目column

Dear Mr. Black,

I am glad that there will be some new columns in our English website. _______________________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Black,

I am glad that there will be some new columns in our English website. Of the four columns, I have higher expectation to Today’s World. As you know, today’s world is a changing world. We will become outdated if we turn a deaf ear to it. From the new column Today’s World we can learn what’s going on around the world. It can also enrich our knowledge of the latest science and technology.

As to my suggestion, I would appreciate it if there are more English-learning columns in the website. Most of my classmates are eager to learn English well, but short of learning chances after class. I hope our website can do something about it.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要點已給出，寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態、語態、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1.詞數100左右； 2.開頭和結尾己給出，不計入總詞數；3.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】句子結構嚴謹，層次分明，布局合理，文中巧妙使用高級句子和短句。I am glad that there will be some new columns in our English website.句中使用賓語從句；As you know, today’s world is a changing world. As引導的非限制性定語從句在句中體現；We will become outdated if we turn a deaf ear to it.條件狀語從句運用合理；Today’s World we can learn what’s going on around the world. what引導的賓語從句恰如其分；As to my suggestion, I would appreciate it if there are more English-learning columns in the website.固定短語、固定句式完美使用。