Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Wang Lin is a child who has grown up in the SOS Children’s Village. It was in 1992 he was sent there.At that time she was only four years old. Fortunately, he met many kind and warm-hearted worker. They took good care of him and he lived a happily life. Two years ago, he was admitted to an university. Upon heard the news, all the people in the village feel very glad. ＂He is an intelligent but hard-working boy. He set a good example for the children here, and we are all proud for him,＂ one worker said. Wang Lin loves the village and the people there, so he is often returns to see them whenever he is free.

Answer 1

【答案】

Wang Lin is a child who has grown up in the SOS Children’s Village. It was in 1992 he was sent there.At that time was only four years old. Fortunately, he met many kind and warm-hearted . They took good care of him and he lived a life. Two years ago, he was admitted to university. Upon the news, all the people in the village very glad. ＂He is an intelligent hard-working boy. He set a good example for the children here, and we are all proud him,＂ one worker said. Wang Lin loves the village and the people there, so he often returns to see them whenever he is free.

【解析】

第一處：he前面加that 此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，強(qiáng)調(diào)的是時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)in 1992，故需要加that構(gòu)成強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的基本框架。

第二處：she → he 從全文看，Wang Lin是個(gè)男孩子，應(yīng)該用he指代。

第三處：worker → workers 前面修飾語(yǔ)是many，而且下文用They指代，故此處用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式。

第四處：happily → happy 修飾名詞應(yīng)該用形容詞，故把happily改為happy。

第五處：an → a university是以輔音音素開(kāi)頭的單詞，應(yīng)該用不定冠詞a。

第六處：heard → hearing 介詞后面用動(dòng)名詞形式，upon doing sth意思是＂一……就＂。

第七處：feel → felt 從語(yǔ)境判斷應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，故把feel改為felt。

第八處：but → and 前后兩個(gè)形容詞是并列關(guān)系，且此處表示＂又，且＂，故把but改為and。

第九處：for → of 固定短語(yǔ)be proud of的意思是＂因……而驕傲/自豪＂，故把for改為of。

第十處：去掉is return是實(shí)義動(dòng)詞，而且此處不是進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)，也不需要用被動(dòng)形式，故去掉is。