Question

以“我最喜歡看的電視節目”為題寫一篇作文，字數70---80。
提示：1、我最喜歡看的電視節目是”動物世界”(The World of the Animals)。
2、通過看這節目，我能看到許多可愛的動物以及其他一些正面臨的危險，并領略世界各地的風光。
3、但成千上萬的生物正在消失，包括各種動物，并且解釋了這些動物被殺死是因為人們要得到它們的毛皮和骨頭。
4、我們應保護動物。
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           

Answer 1

"Animal World" is a popular TV program by CCTV. It is also my favourite program. I like it because I really like small animals. Also, the host has the ability to make the program lively and interesting. Finally, from the program I have learned a lot about how animals live, which I didn’t know before.
After I see this program, I know that many cute animals are in great danger, There are thousands of animals are disappearing, including all kinds of animals, people kill them for their furry and bone. I think we should protect the animals,only in this way can we protect our earth

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第一人稱，注意時態語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: . I like it because I really like small animals. Also,the host has the ability to make the program lively and interesting from the program I have learned a lot about how animals live, which Ididn't know before.學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理. I think we should protect the animals ,Only in this way can we protect our earth 最后一句點名了文章的主旨我們要保護動物。