Question

請以“ The  happy life  ”為題，根據以下的內容描述一下你現在的幸福生活和對未來的憧憬。
內容提示：1學校生活樂趣多，和同學一起學習，相處融洽。
2希望將來有個喜歡的好的工作。
3現在努力學習，希望夢想成真。
要求80字左右，內容豐富，自由發揮，不涉及真實姓名。
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Answer 1

The Happy Life
My school life has a lot of fun. I like studying in the classroom with my lovely classmates. We get on well
with each other. We play sports and sing songs together. But sometimes there is too much homework. I don't
have free time to play with my pet. I wish to have a job I like and have a house with a garden.
I will share my success with my parents. Now, I must study hard to make my dream come true.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。首先要仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。其次提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象。要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。然后根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；語言表達要符合英語習慣。
【亮點說明】這篇短文內容完整，能根據提示表達清楚所有的要點，能合理的運用連詞，如But，較高級的句式，如I wish to have a job I like and have a house with a garden使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。