Question

1．假設(shè)你有位朋友叫 Kitty，現(xiàn)列出了她的一些情況，請(qǐng)根據(jù)此寫(xiě)一篇題為"My Best Friend"的英文短文．

外貌特征	品行	愛(ài)好	未來(lái)計(jì)劃
1圓臉，長(zhǎng)發(fā) 2笑瞇瞇的眼睛 3看上去很聰明、可愛(ài)	1 比班上其他任何學(xué)生都努力； 2 富有幽默感，…； （舉一例說(shuō)明） 3對(duì)人友善，… （舉一例說(shuō)明）	喜歡旅行，去年和父母一起去北京，參觀(guān)了很多名勝古跡，如：長(zhǎng)城、…．他們?cè)谀峭娴暮荛_(kāi)心．	長(zhǎng)大后想成為…，做些…

要求：
1表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2必須包含所有信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3字?jǐn)?shù)在 100 字左右；
4不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等．

Answer 1

分析 重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
try one'e best to do  盡某人最大努力去做某事
tell stories to sb  給某人講故事
be kind to sb 對(duì)某人友善
she went to Beijing with her parents，where she visited some places of interests，such as the Great Wall，the palace museum and so on她和父母去了北京，在那里參觀(guān)了很多名勝古跡，比如 長(zhǎng)城 故宮…places of interest  名勝古跡； such as 例如；  and so on 等等
When people have difficulties in life，she always tries her best to help them．當(dāng)人們有困難時(shí)他總是盡他最大努力去幫助他人． have difficulty in  在某方面有困難；try one's best to do 盡某人最大努力去做某事

解答 My best friend
 My best friend is Kity，who has a round face．She has long hair and big eyes．She always smiles and she looks smart and cute．＜外貌特征＞She is a god student，and she studies harder than other students in the class．What's more，she is very humous，and she often tells funny stories to other people，which makes others happy．Besides，he is kind to people．When people have difficulties in life，she always tries her best to help them．＜高分句型＞＜品行＞She likes traveling ．Last year，she went to Beijing with her parents，where she visited some places of interests，such as the Great Wall，the palace museum and so on．＜高分句型＞They all had a good time there．＜愛(ài)好＞She wants to be a guide in the future，and she will travel around the world one day．＜未來(lái)計(jì)劃＞

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