Question

假如上周日你參加了長江社區的Yard Sale活動。請給你們學校校刊上的English Club欄目寫一篇關于此次活動的介紹。
要點如下：
1有200多人參加了此次活動；
2有的人出售舊物如：衣服、玩具、自行車等；
3有的人出售自制的蛋糕、卡片、書簽等；
4還有的人交換舊書；
5請寫一至兩點你對此次活動的看法。
注意：
1詞數60—80 ，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
2文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱。不要逐條翻譯。
參考詞匯：
Changjiang Community  n .長江社區 exchange  v. 交換  used  adj舊的

Answer 1

It was fine last Sunday. I went to the Yard Sale in Changjiang Community. More than 200 people took tark in the activity .Some people sold used things such as bikes, toys, and clothes. Others sold cakes, cards and bookmarks made by themselves. Used books could be exchanged in the yard, too. I enjoyed myself there. In my opinion, it was a very good activity. We can not only make full use of used things, but also protect our environment in this way.

作者根據題目要點提示，對Yard Sale情況進行了描述最后談了自己的看法。整篇文章行文流暢，能較好地運用所學短語和句型來表達自己的意思，語句通順，語法運用得當。