Question

書面表達。
每個人都有自己的夢想，在你的班級小組里，李明想成為一名老師，王林想成為一名工程師，李東想成為一名醫生，你的夢想是什么呢？
注意：1. 文章必須包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作適當發揮。
2. 詞數：70詞左右。標題和開頭已給出，不計入詞數。

Our dreams	1	Everyone has his own dream.
	2	Li  Ming is going to… Wang  Lin… Li  Dong…
	3	1 want to be… We will study hard for…

 
Our dreams
Everyone has his own dream.                                            ___       
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                    

Answer 1

Everyone has his own dream .There are four students in our group . They are Li Ming, Wang Lin, Li Dong and I .We are talking about our future .Li Ming is going to be a teacher when he grows up .Wang Lin is going to be an engineer .He wants to fix computers and fridges for us .Li Dong is going to be a doctor .He will help the sick people .And I want to be a policeman in the future .We will study hard for our dreams.

解析試題分析：本文的寫作不難，首先介紹我們小組有四個同學There are four students in our group分別討論了自己的未來talk about our future，然后分別介紹四個同學的夢想be a teacher，be an engineer，be a doctor，be a policeman這樣一氣呵成，再用一句話進行擴展，說明成為心目中的人物后會做什么，最后表明我們都會為我們的夢想奮斗的We will study hard for our dreams.
考點：提綱類寫作
點評：本文難度不大，寫作條理性要把握好，對于初一的作文，不要求有很華美的詞語，重在培養自己連詞成句的能力，避免中式英文。在平時的練習中要多去背誦范文，對表達好的句子，短語要進行積累，并默寫，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無患。