Question

以My School day為題寫一篇短文，描述一下自己一天的學校生活和學習情況。要求：中心明確、語句通順，60詞左右。
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Answer 1

My School day
I am a primary school student. I am twelve years old. I usually get up at 6: 00 in the morning, after breakfast I go to school at 6: 50. I have seven lessons in a day. I learn Chinese, Maths, English and other subjects. In the afternoon, I do sports with my friends. In the evening I do my homework and watch TV with my parents. I go to bed at about 9 in the evening. My school life is wonderful. I love my school day.

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，安排好文章的內容。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。注意單詞的拼寫及標點符號的運用。
【亮點說明】1、短文的時態運用很好，因為是校園生活的某一天，所以一般現在時最合適；
2、短文內容充實，介紹了從早到晚的作息時間，以及給時間段的活動。
3、短文結尾用了總結性文字，提升了情感品味。