Question

根據中文大意和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。所給的英文提示詞僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。
74. 生活中我們每天都在與人交往，也許你曾經遇到過這樣的困境：你想在聚會上穿的衣服
臟了讓媽媽幫你洗，然而媽媽因為工作太忙沒有時間洗；與同學共同完成墻報(a wall
newspaper)時，你有一個自認為很好的想法沒有被采納；你最近學習很忙，但是向你請教問
題的同學很執著；…… 你是怎樣做的？
現在，請你就與人交往(communicating with others)的話題向《21世紀英語報》投稿。 描
述一次你解決與他人交往困境的經歷，并談談你的感受。
提示詞語：experience; get on well; help; talk; by oneself; understand; respect; share; enjoy
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Answer 1

One possible version:
In our life, we communicate with others every day. It’s important to get on well with each other. However, it’s not an easy thing.
Once, two of my classmates and I were working on a wall
newspaper. I thought I had a great idea but they didn’t use it. I was sad and decided never to talk to them. But after giving it a second thought, I talked to them, telling them about my feelings and how I wished they could use my idea. They apologized to me sincerely and explained to me the reason. We got to understand each other and came up with a better idea which made the wall newspaper eye-catching.
From the experience, I know how important it is to have a
heart-to-heart talk, especially when having problems. If we try to understand each other more, we will enjoy a better relationship and more happiness.

試題分析：本文的寫作首先引出寫作的主題，說明在交流過程中也會遇到一些困難的事情，并非易事However, it’s not an easy thing.然后再說明自己一次的經歷并說明自己剛開始如何處理的，后由于自己的努力最終問題解決了，從這個角度來說明溝通的重要性，最后，從這次經歷中總結自己的觀點，說明當發生矛盾時要多進行心對心的交流，才能有更好的關系especially when having problems. If we try to understand each other more, we will enjoy a better relationship and more happiness.
點評：本文的寫作要抓住要點，對該所選的的相關內容都要描寫到。初三的作文著重考察學生連詞成句的能力，要在“準”字上下功夫。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數關系和動詞時態等諸多方面。在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進行默寫，考試時就能寫出準確地道的作文。