Question

作為中學生，學習任務重，但也需要豐富多彩的業余生活。某英文報紙正以“My Spare Time”為題征文，請你投稿。說說你經常做些什么，并請說明想法或理由。
提示詞語：busy；colorful；sports；healthy；read；knowledge；relax；housework

Answer 1

One possible version:
My Spare Time
I am a middle school student. Though I’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful.
After school I usually play sports. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often do some reading in the evening. I think books are our best friends. They give us much knowledge that we can’t learn at school. Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet. I find it’s a good way to relax myself. At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world. At the weekends I often help my parents with the housework, so they can have a good rest.
I enjoy myself in my spare time.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將自己的業余時間介紹清澈。根據材料可知，本文主要用一般現在時態，第一人稱進行敘述，寫作中主語時態及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當使用連接詞。
【亮點說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be busy with忙著做某事；watch TV看電視；at the sametime同時；have a rest休息等短語和句式。作者并且在寫作中巧妙的使用了連詞，序數詞，使得本文看起來邏輯清楚，條理分明。所以在學習中，我們應注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.