Question

書面表達。(共一題，計10分)

請根據下面提供的信息，以My Penfriend 為題，寫一篇英語短文，字數在70字左右。

要點如下，請適當發揮想象力，不必逐句翻譯：

王飛，一個14歲的男孩子，他來自上海，現就讀于上海實驗中學七年級一班。

戴著眼鏡，短發，看起來…今天他穿著… ,很好看。

學習刻苦，每天7點起床，晚上9點睡覺。

很少吃零食，因為他想要……最喜歡春節，因為……

待人很有禮貌，樂于助人，他經常……多好的一個男孩子啊！

開頭已給出，不計總詞數。

Tip:上海實驗中學 Shanghai Experimental Secondary

My penfriend

I have a penfriend. His name is Wang Fei.

                                                                           

                                                                           

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I have many friends, and they have different favorite subjects. John’s favorite subject is computer because he thinks computer can help him a lot in his study. He is a computer fan. He likes playing computer games very much, and he is good at playing it. Jack likes art best because he likes drawing pictures a lot. Mary likes Chinese because her father is Chinese. Her father teaches her Chinese at home. She loves China very much, and she wants to know more about China. Bob think math is very interesting, so he likes math best. David likes P. E. because he likes doing sports. He is good at playing basketball and soccer…….

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達，是介紹一個朋友王飛。所以本文的人稱應該是第三人稱，在完成句子是應特別注意動詞的單三形式，如has 、is、lives、likes等。在寫作時，要盡量利用上所給的提示內容，表達時應使句型順暢并符合英語的習慣表達方法。注意連詞的運用，盡量少用排比句，因為英語最忌諱重復。

考點：命題作文。

點評：在寫書面表達時首先要注意的問題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱（如本題就要用第三人稱）；其次，應注意動詞的形式，根據不同的人稱確定動詞的形式（本題要注意單三形式）；再次，句型應該符合英語的表達習慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句。