Question

學(xué)校English story telling club正在招募新成員（member）， 假如你叫Lucy，請根據(jù)提示給俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)老師Mr. Li寫一封電子郵件。
要點如下：
你擅長英語，愿意加入這個俱樂部；
你對用英語講故事感興趣，能講很多英語故事；
講述一次值得你記憶的假期經(jīng)歷。（包括：時間與地點，天氣，活動（3件），感受）
注意：
1. 恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^度與結(jié)尾。
2. 書寫整潔，字?jǐn)?shù)：60-80字，電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr.Li,
I know the school English story telling club wants some new members now. I’m happy to tell you ________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________                                                             Yours,
Lucy

Answer 1

Dear Mr.Li,
I know the school English story telling club wants some new members now. I’m happy to tell you I want to join the club because I am good at English.And I am also interested in telling stories in English.I can tell many stories in English.I usually tell my friends some stories after class.
I am telling my story in English.One day I went camping with my friends in the mountain.It was sunny at first.I took some photos.Later it began to rain.We had to put up our tents.Suddently Li lei saw a snake climbing on the ground.He was too scared to move.I know the snake has no ears but it can feel things moving.Then we jumped up and down.It moved into the forest.We were safe. We were very happy.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lucy

試題分析：本文是學(xué)生熟悉的信的格式，在信中介紹自己的愛好時要用一般現(xiàn)在時，要注意句子的主語。但是在講述自己的故事的時候，一定要注意時態(tài)的變化，敘述以前的一次旅行一般要用過去式。
【亮點說明】短文用了一些短語和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：And I am also interested in telling stories in English. Later it began to rain .We had to put up our tents. Suddently Li lei saw a snake climbing on the ground.He was too scared to move.等。文中用了一些連詞如and，because等，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)變的復(fù)雜了。用了一些also，later等，使上下文銜接的很好。