Question

根據以下有關Leo的個人情況介紹，以Leo Smith 為題，寫一篇介紹他的短文。

要求：用第三人稱;用詞在60~80 之間;所給信息必須全部用上。

Name: Leo Smith	Age: 15
Address: 69 Park Road	New YorkNationality: American
Occupation（職業）: student	Favourite subjects: art and P.E.
Weekday activities: swimming and working	Usual Saturday activity: having parties
Usual Sunday activity: watching TV

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

   Leo Smith is an American boy.He is fifteen years old.He lives at 69 Park Road New York with his parents.Leo is a student in No.4 High School.On weekdays, he studies very hard.Art and P.E.are his favourite subjects.In his spare time, he likes doing sports.He usually goes swimming three times a week.On Saturdays, he often has parties.He likes making friends and they always enjoy themselves.After a week’s hard work, he likes staying at home and watching TV on Sundays.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。應注意的主要內容為：內容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的數量和準確性及上下文的連貫性。同時針對個人的真實情況與短文的要求進行恰當的事合，更能加強作品的可讀性。

【亮點說明】本文很好地完成了試題規定的任務。這是一篇給材料作文，根據所提供的信息，介紹他人，介紹別人要用第三人稱，作者在寫作中，介紹了姓名、年齡、出處以及他一天所從事活動，語句通順、符合邏輯。

考點：提綱作文。