Question

書面表達(10分)
今天星期天,4月10日.你和李明在家一起做老師課上講的實驗:將蠟燭放在裝了水的盤子里,點燃一會兒后,上面蓋上一個玻璃杯,蠟燭熄滅后,杯中的水面會升高。將這一實驗過程以日記的形式記下來。(不少于60詞)

Answer 1

Sunday, April 10
Today is Sunday. I stayed at home. Li Ming and I did the experiment that the teacher told us in class. We put a candle, a glass and a dish on the desk. We filled the dish half full of water. Put the candle on the dish, and then lit it. After the candle burned for a few minutes, we put the glass over the candle. After the while the candle stopped burning, and the water inside the glass rose. How interesting science is!

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