Question

假設某美國教育代表團將來你校參觀訪問，請你根據下表提示的信息，用英語向外賓簡單介紹學校近年來所發(fā)生的變化，并談談你的感想。

環(huán)境及設施	過去	現在
	至少列舉兩例說明過去情況	操場更大、籃球場更多；圖書新、品種多； 樹木四季常青，學校美如花園……
你的感想	……

注意：
1．詞數不少于90。文章的開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。
2．要點完整、層次清晰、語法正確、上下文連貫。
3．文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。
Ladies and gentlemen! It’s my honor to tell you about the changes to our school.
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I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much!

Answer 1

Ladies and gentlemen! It’s my honor to tell you about the changes to our school.
In the past, there was only a small playground. The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them. The number of the trees and flowers was small.
But things have greatly changed these years. Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts. More different kinds of new books can be lent to us. Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round.
I think it’s lucky of us to have such good studying environment. We will work harder and serve the people better in the future.
I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much!

解析試題分析：這是一篇介紹類作文，要點和開頭結尾已經給出。我們所要做的就是用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來。本作文中給出的要點比較簡略,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多。需要注意不要偏離文章中心。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭結尾,不能出現文章脫節(jié)問題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
考點：介紹類作文
點評：本文屬于介紹類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。