Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（共10分）
為了使同學(xué)們之間相處得更加融洽，并且能夠更好地適應(yīng)社會(huì)，你校學(xué)生會(huì)正在舉辦以“how to behave well”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />要點(diǎn)：1.守時(shí)、有禮貌、誠(chéng)實(shí)、公正；
2.友好待人，樂(lè)于助人；
3. ……
要求：1.用上所給要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地址等相關(guān)信息。
3. 80個(gè)單詞左右。
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

One possible version：
What should we teenagers do to get on well with everything and everyone else? Here is what we should do and shouldn’t be allowed to do.
As a good student, we must be on time and honest. And we should be polite and fair to everyone. Also, we should be kind and friendly to others. We should be ready to help people in trouble. Then we can get the same help from others. Besides these, we should obey traffic rules to keep safe. But we shouldn’t make noise in public. We shouldn’t drop litter everywhere, either.
It is not easy to behave well in daily life. However, everything will be OK if we try our best.

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)應(yīng)根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容談?wù)劚憩F(xiàn)得更好。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)該注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)與文章層次。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)。文章銜接連貫，運(yùn)用了as a good student, and, also, then, besides,but等連詞進(jìn)行銜接。同時(shí)，本文中運(yùn)用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:on time, be fair to , in public, drop litter everywhere等。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，第一段引出話題，第二段詳細(xì)表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)，第三段總結(jié)。