Question

根據提示，請以“ School Rules”為題， 寫一篇短文：每所，學校都有規章制度 。下面是你們學校的一些規章制度，請你向一位新生Mary作一下介紹。內容包括：

1. 上課不能遲到。

2. 教室要保持(keep)干凈和安靜。

3. 見到老師要問好。（greet)

4. 不允許在教室里吃東西。

5. 不許在課堂上聽音樂，玩游戲。

6. 不要損害花草樹木。（pick flowers; climb trees）

要求：意思連貫、語句通順。70詞左右。

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                     

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                     

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                     

                                                                    

                                                                    

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

School Rules

　　  Welcome to our school, Mary. Here are some  of  our school rules. Let me tell you: We can't arrive late for class. We can't talk loudly in class. We have to be quiet in class, and we have to keep our class clean. When we meet the teachers on the way, we must greet them. We can't eat or drink in the classroom. But we can eat outside. We can't listen to music or play games in class, either. We can't pick flowers or climb trees.  

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，向一位新生Mary介紹學校的規章制度。題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動筆前應根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態，關鍵單詞等問題。為了使語言更顯親切,在寫作時，本文的主語主要是用復數第一人稱，時態一般應該用一般現在時態. 注意時間狀語與時態的搭配及主謂一致問題。注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫,適當使用連詞。

考點：說明文寫作

點評：此類作為首先要做的就是認真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數。另外為了應付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應考時就會有法可依。