Question

為了使同學們更加健康快樂地成長，學校決定向同學們征求建議。假如你是王宏，用英語給校長寫一篇80個詞左右的建議信。注意：文中應包含所有要點，并適當發揮；不能出現真實的校名和姓名。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Headmaster,

These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will___________________________________________

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___________________________________________. Hope my suggestions will be helpful.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Hong

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Headmaster,

These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well.

As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less and more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practise. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.

Hope my suggestions will be helpful.

【解析】

試題分析: 這是一篇應用文寫作，寫一封建議信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫，為了使說明更具邏輯性，適當使用序數詞。

考點：考查應用文的寫作

點評：注意寫作中的時態、人稱和數的問題，時態一般是一般現在時態，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。