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書(shū)面表達(dá)

有一種節(jié)約叫光盤(pán)，有一種公益叫光盤(pán)！所謂光盤(pán)，就是吃光你盤(pán)子中的食物。拒絕浪費(fèi)，珍惜糧食！針對(duì)這項(xiàng)行動(dòng)，并根據(jù)以下提示，請(qǐng)你以No Wasting On Food為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，號(hào)召大家參與這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。

注意：1. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 短文標(biāo)題與開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3. 詞數(shù)：80左右。

Reasons	a waste of food, money,
pollute the environment
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Suggestions	eat up all your food / clear your plate;
leftovers（剩飯菜）…
order less or smaller dishes
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No Wasting On Food

Recently, nearly 26 restaurants in Nanjing have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign（活動(dòng)）against wasting food by offering smaller dishes.

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, nearly 26 restaurants in Nanjing have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign（活動(dòng)） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes.

I believe it is meaningful /necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity.

It is a waste of food and money if we order too much food. Meanwhile, the environment will be polluted by the wasted food. Also, eating too much is bad for our health. We should take action to support the campaign.

First, we should eat up all the food in our dishes and plates. Second, we may order less or smaller dishes in the restraurant. Third, we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later.

In a word, I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作比較好寫(xiě)，生活中的細(xì)節(jié)都可以指導(dǎo)我們來(lái)寫(xiě)。首先，對(duì)這次活動(dòng)意義就行說(shuō)明，進(jìn)行總的概括，可以用I believe it is meaningful /necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity.來(lái)表達(dá)。然后對(duì)浪費(fèi)造成的危害進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，根據(jù)題目的提示及自己的發(fā)揮如吃太多對(duì)我們的健康也是有害的eating too much is bad for our health.來(lái)表達(dá)。最后，對(duì)反對(duì)浪費(fèi)我們應(yīng)該如何做提出建議，可以用first,second third來(lái)進(jìn)行分層說(shuō)明，同時(shí)用一句話進(jìn)行全文的總結(jié)In a word, I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：在對(duì)于諸如此類文章的寫(xiě)作，學(xué)生在平時(shí)的練習(xí)、學(xué)習(xí)生活中要善于積累常用的表達(dá)多個(gè)好處的句型。如be good for,benefit,useful等單詞短語(yǔ)。英語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對(duì)于不會(huì)表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會(huì)替換，同時(shí)注意用平時(shí)在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來(lái)自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，這樣文章才能寫(xiě)出新意，寫(xiě)出文采。