Question

春節(jié)將至，馬上又是新的一年。俗話說(shuō)“一年之計(jì)在于春”，在新的一年里，你有什么計(jì)劃呢？請(qǐng)以“My  New Year’s Resolutions”為題,寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的作文，介紹一下你的新年計(jì)劃。
My New Year’s Resolutions
The Spring Festival is coming soon, I have some plans for the new year.
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Answer 1

My New Year’s Resolutions
The Spring Festival is coming soon, I have some plans for the new year. I will do sports every day to make my body strong. I will work hard at my subjects, such as English, Chinese and so on. I want to improve these subjects to make my teachers happy. Then my teachers will be proud of me. I am going to help my classmates with their lessons. I will help my parents do some housework. They are so tired. I have confidence in myself. I want to be a very good student next year.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。主要寫(xiě)作者的新年計(jì)劃。全文主要用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如do sports ，work hard at，such as，and so on， be proud of，help with，have confidence in等短語(yǔ)，文中還用到了不定式做狀語(yǔ)如 to make my body strong，to make my teachers happy；不定式做賓語(yǔ) to improve these subjects；文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。