Question

近幾年，我國(guó)實(shí)施法定節(jié)假日放假，于是，很多人趕在這些節(jié)假日外出旅游，引發(fā)了很多問題。請(qǐng)你就以下現(xiàn)象，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)并提出改進(jìn)措施。字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80字。

垃圾滿地。 2．車多，停不到車，亂停車。 3．插隊(duì)。 4．在景區(qū)亂涂亂畫。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

A lot of people choose to spend holidays by traveling.This causes a lot of problems.

You can see rubbish everywhere in many places of interest.Some sights are filled with cars.There is not enough place for so many cars,so drivers park everywhere.It’s rude of some visitors to push in before in others.Moreover,some people are rude enough to write and draw during their visit.I think it’s important for people to have good manners.Rubbish must be thrown into dustbins.We can choose public transport when going out.It’s polite to queue for our turn.Everyone should act to keep the sights clean.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文是呼吁環(huán)保的，近幾年，我國(guó)實(shí)施法定節(jié)假日放假，于是，很多人趕在這些節(jié)假日外出旅游，引發(fā)了很多問題。所以圍繞以下四點(diǎn)提示來展開寫作， 1．垃圾滿地。2．車多，停不到車，亂停車。3．插隊(duì)。4．在景區(qū)亂涂亂畫。最后還要發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇不錯(cuò)的作文，作者緊緊圍繞提示語進(jìn)行了寫作，并且最后發(fā)表了自己的觀點(diǎn)。而且文中還運(yùn)用了不少短語，例如，a lot of ， places of interest， are filled with，It’s rude of sb. to do sth.， have good manners， be thrown into， keep the sights clean等等，為作文增添了色彩。

考點(diǎn)：提示性作文。