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某英語(yǔ)報(bào)開展“How to Deal with the Exam Stress”征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)圖片和表格中提示的內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。
注意：（1）詞數(shù)90左右，短文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
（2）文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名

How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.
 
 
 
 

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How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.If we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. Besides, it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them. So we can pass the exams easily.
However, if we have too heavy stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired. We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end.
In my opinion, to deal with stress, we’d better plan and prepare well. We should also form some good habits, such as enough exercise and healthy diets. Then we’ll feel relaxed and do well in the exams.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹如何解決考試帶來(lái)的壓力。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：A little bit of stress can be......；it can remind us to .....；if we have......及we’d better ......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要用題目要求的提綱內(nèi)容。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭考試帶來(lái)的壓力的好處，接下來(lái)介紹考試壓力的不利之處，最后指出我們解決考試壓力。此處用了remind us to，feel too tired，too heavy stress，in the end，form some good habits, do well in等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。