Question

1．要點：1．Jane，在一所混合學校學習，最喜歡的語言是法語．
2．長著一張國字臉，筆直的長頭發，馬尾辮．
3．愛整潔，慷慨大方，關心人，有一副好嗓子．
4．和她在一起從不感到無聊，愿意和朋友們分享她的快樂，
5．長大后想當一名社會工作者，傾聽人們的問題并主動提供幫助．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
She always help others  without expecting anything in return．她總是幫助別人不求回報
expect…in return．期待…作為回報．
【高分句型二】
She wants to be a social worker so that he can listen to people and give them a hand．她想長大后想當一名社會工作者，以此傾聽人們的問題并主動提供幫助．
want to be想成為…；so that引導目的狀語從句；give sb a hand幫助某人．

解答 Jane is a girl that studies in a mixed school．Her favourite language is French．（學校和喜歡的語言） She has a square face，long straight hair and a ponytail．（外貌特征） She is generous and helpful．She always help others without expecting anything in return．【高分句型一】She has a beautiful voice and we all like to listen to her wonderful songs．If you stay with her，you will never feel bored．Jane likes share her happiness with her friends..（優點） She wants to be a social worker so that he can listen to people and give them a hand．（理想）

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