Question

某中文網站提出“走路去上學”的倡議，請你就這一話題寫一篇約80詞的英語短文。
內容提示：1. 走路有利于健康且安全；
2. 和同學結伴可以相互了解，相互幫助；
3. 不需要父母接送，學會自理；
4. 道路上車輛減少，城市不再擁堵；
……
要求：1. 要點齊全，條理清楚，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規范。
2. 文中不得出現真實校名及姓名，否則不予評分。
3. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數，可適當發揮。
參考詞匯: be good for, each other, send, no longer, crowded
Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise.                                         
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   

Answer 1

Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise. I think it's good for health and it's safe. When we walk with our classmates, we can talk about something interesting and know each other better. Also, we can help each other. What's more, if we walk, our parents don't have to send us to school. We can learn to look after ourselves. As a result, there will be fewer cars in the city. Then the streets are no longer crowded.
I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.

試題分析：這是篇命題作文。題中給出了寫作的要點，寫作時一定要注意要點的齊全，并可適當展開擴充；句子之間可加入一些承接性的句子來加強文章的連貫性和邏輯性。
【亮點分析】這篇文章要點齊全，表達準確流暢。文中用了一些常用的表達方式，如：When we walk with our classmates, we can talk about something interesting and know each other better.當我們和同學一起走路時，我們可以談論一些有趣的事情并且更好的了解對方。When引導時間狀語從句。另外，文中用來一些承接性的句子，如Also 同樣；What's more另外；As a result結果是；Then然后。