Question

我國是一個發展中國家，我們應該勤儉節約，使中國成為—個節約型的社會。我們中學生應該從身邊的點滴做起，節約能源。你是如何做的？請你就這一個話題寫一篇小短文，要求語句通順，語法正詩，意思完整，80詞左右。下列詞語供參考(don’t take…，recycle books and pa-per ,tum off …,take your own bags ,don’t use piastic bags ,cut down ,take  care of- -)
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Answer 1

What will you do to save energy ? I think we should do followings :First, it’ s best to ride a bike to school , don’t take a bus or a taxi. Second , I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. Third ,in my free time , I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling . The fourth idea is turning off the shower when I’m not using it .Fifth, it is important to save water and money .Also , I won’t spend too much money on expensive things . Last , we had better not cut down the trees , we have to take care of the trees . I’ll try my best to save energy ,I hope I can do something for our country .

這是一篇給材料作文，所給材料比較簡單，需要自己圍繞材料適當發揮。在寫作時要注意時態，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規范性,注意應用所給單詞，短語。結合材料可知本文主要是一般將來時態，第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，序數詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，、條理清楚，符合邏輯關系。