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書面表達
“保護環境，人人有責”，你想成為綠色使者嗎?請行動起來吧！其實，環保就在我們身邊，例如，拒絕一次性紙杯，隨手關掉電燈，使用布做的購物袋，盡量騎自行車出行……請以“How to Be a Greener Person”為題，寫一篇有關環保的短文，并適當發表你的看法。（80詞左右）

Answer 1

How to Be a Greener Person
It’s our duty to protect the environment around us. The three Rs—reduce, reuse and recycle—are important. I think we’d better not buy bottles or boxes which people can only use once. We should turn off the lights when we are not using them. We can give old clothes to others to reuse them. When we go shopping, we’d better take a cloth bag rather than use plastic bags. We shouldn’t throw things away if they can be reused, repaired or recycled. It’s important for us to protect animals and plants. We are supposed to prevent the factory from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and so on. If everyone is doing that, our world will become more and more beautiful.

試題分析：環境保護的文體是中考常考的主題，對于本文的寫作學生首先開門見山指出保護環境是非常重要的，是我們的責任，可以利用it作為形式主語的句式來展開；然后，對環境保護應該如何做進行闡述如拒絕一次性紙杯，隨手關掉電燈，使用布做的購物袋，盡量騎自行車出行，保護動植物，防止工廠的排污等，從這幾方面進行展開論述。句式上可以使用we’d better，It’s important for us to，We are supposed to等來闡述所寫的內容。最后，一句話進行總結，說明如果這樣做世界將會變得更美more and more beautiful。
點評：本文難度不大，寫作條理性要把握好，對于要做的幾件事情，寫的過程中通過變換句式和用詞上來提高語言的美度。在一件事情寫完后要用上表關系的連接詞，或平時積累的各類表遞進、并列的連詞來是文章富于活力。在平時的練習中要多去背誦范文，對表達好的句子，短語要進行積累，并默寫，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無患。