Question

短文寫作（12分)
Michael 的朋友 Sam 在學習和生活中遇到以下煩惱，請你以Michael的名義給Tom寫一封信來安慰他，并提出你的建議。
信息提示：
一個人不適應新的環境，很孤單。
英語考試沒考好很焦慮。
睡眠不好，身體和精神狀態很差。
父母不讓上網。
放假想去旅行沒有錢。
要   求：1. 語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規范，所給信息必須全部用上；
2. 適當發揮，詞數80詞左右。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）
Dear Sam,
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yours,
Michael

Answer 1

Dear Sam,
How is everything going ?In your last letter you told me you couldn’t get used to the new environment and felt very lonely.I think it’s normal at first for a person who goes into a new place. You can make some friends and talk or play with them ,if so you will feel better and less lonely.As for your English test,you needn’t be worried about it.You can think why and how you got such a grade.And later try your best to learn English ,I’m sure you can do well in it next time.Enough sleep is important to our health,so you should do more exercise and get enough sleep,then you’ll be in good health and energetic soon.You shouldn’t get online all the time.If you want to get online,you should ask for your parents’ permission,I’m sure they’ll understand you.If you want to travel but have no money,you can borrow some from your parents or friends first,or do some part-time jobs to make some money yourself.
I hope I can help you.
yours,
Michael

試題分析：這是一篇根據提示寫一篇敘事完整，語句規范的作文。這就要求仔細閱讀所給提示，然后考慮用什么樣的句子來描述內容畫。細節方面就要注意時態，語法以及銜接詞的運用等。
【亮點說明】這篇文章語言規范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態運用正確，能夠把要求的內容敘述清楚，做到了首尾呼應，是一篇不錯的文章。