Question

Write A、passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I want to volunteer in/at_________”.以“我想在________擔(dān)任志愿者”為題,寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。)

（ 注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）

Questions for reference （以下問題僅供參考）

Where do you want to volunteer?

Why do you want to be a volunteer there?

Do you have any problem with volunteering?

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I want to volunteer at a hospital. One reason is that volunteering at a hospital can offer me the chance to learn new things and broaden my horizons. The other reason to volunteer at a hospital is that I can help other people. Hospitals exist to improve or maintain patients' health, so anything I do to help the hospital is, directly or indirectly, making people healthier and improving their lives. But I have a problem with volunteering,it is that I am afraid of blood. So I must practise facing blood .

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。主要寫為什么要在醫(yī)院當(dāng)志愿者，全文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如One...the other,have a problem with , am that I can help other people，afraid of 等短語，表語從句that volunteering at a hospital can offer me the chance to learn new things and broaden my horizons，that I am afraid of blood；不定式做定語to volunteer at a hospital；動名詞做主語volunteering at a hospital；定語從句 I do to help the hospital。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。