Question

隨著網絡的發展，人們消費觀念的轉變，購物方式也在悄然地發生變化。“網購”成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也正加入到網購群體當中。請你根據以下表格的提示，寫一篇網上購物的文章。

優點	1. 足不出戶；節約時間；避免擁護、勞累 2. 足不出戶；節約時間；避免擁護、勞累 3. 可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多
缺點	1. 只看到圖片，看不到商品本身 2. 容易購買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費

注意：①所表述的內容必須包含表格中的所有方面；

②文中不能出現自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱及其它相關信息，否則不予評分；

③詞數：80 詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

提示詞匯：網購shopping on line; 避免做某事avoid doing sth; 商品goods; 導致cause

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping on line.

【解析】

一、審題

本篇作文考查體裁為議論文。要求寫一篇網上購物的文章，使用對比的方式，分析網購的利弊。

二、列舉寫作要點

1. “網購”成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也正加入到網購群體當中。

2. 優點

①足不出戶；節約時間；避免擁護、勞累

②足不出戶；節約時間；避免擁護、勞累

③可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多

3. 缺點

①只看到圖片，看不到商品本身

②容易購買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費

4. 總結。

三、列出重點短語及句型

be used to, in our life, be interested in, go outdoors, get tried, shop in line, avoid doing sth, choose from, on one hand…on the other hand, different from, all in all