Question

根據漢語提示及要求,以Sally’s Dream為題寫一篇短文.

提示: 1.Sally是一個中學生,她想成為一名職業演員.

2.她同時也是一名志愿者,經常參加一些志愿者服務活動,業余時間她還上表演課.

3.現在她遇到了一些麻煩,無錢上表演課.她想出了許多辦法,如: 打電話給家長、主動輔導孩子的美術、張貼啟事尋找工作掙錢等。

4．問題解決了，她可以繼續上課了，她的夢想會實現的。

要求：1、條理清晰，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規范。

2、不少于80個單詞。

Sally’s Dream

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Answer 1

Sally is a middle school student; she wants to become a professional actor. She is also a volunteer, often takes part in some volunteer service activities. In her spare time, she also has acting lessons.
But she has some trouble now. She had no money for the acting lessons. She has come up with many ways to solve the problem. She made a phone call to the parents to help children's art. Also, she posted notice to find work to earn money.

So far, the problem has been solved and she can continue to have her classes. I hope that her dream will come true.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，所給內容十分詳細，在組織文章時注意時態和句式結構正確就可以了。提醒學生注意用一些短語或句子來使上下文讀起來流暢。

【亮點說明】這篇短文注意到了敘述事件時的時態變化，能適當的運用連詞和國定短語。文章要點全，幾乎沒有語病錯誤。能適當的發揮。

考點：提綱作文。