Question

假設你是名初三畢業生，考上了理想的學校。今天是開學第一天，請你根據下表所列的 內容要點，用英語寫一篇日記，寫下這一天的感受。.

去校前	興奮(原因自擬） 擔憂(原因自擬）
到校后	發現老師、同學友好 忘了緊張、感覺自在
離校時	不會再擔心 相信會快樂

注意：
1. 詞數90左右；
2. 日記的開頭已為你寫好，不計人總詞數；
3. 日記須包括所有內容要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發揮，使其連貫、通順；
4. 日記中不得出現真實的人名、校名等相關信息。
Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year. I was excited as well as worried.＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
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Answer 1

One possible version ：
Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year, I was excited as well as worried.
I was excited because I am a student of senior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers, students in this school. I was afraid that I couldn’t fit in well.
When I got to school, I found everyone was really sweet to me. Teachers were kind and ready to help us. I soon forgot my nervousness. 1 felt at home.
At the end of today, I felt no more fear and I believe I will have lots of fun at this new school.

這是一篇給材料作文，所給材料比較簡單，需要自己圍繞材料適當發揮。在寫作時要注意時態，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規范性。結合材料可知本文主要是一般過去時態，人稱問題比較復雜，注意主謂一致問題。結合材料內容可知本文主要按照時間順序進行敘述，注意時間狀語與時態的搭配問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，、條理清楚，符合邏輯關系。