Question

1．假定你是Lily，今天收到好朋友Mary發(fā)了的e-mail，在郵件中Mary說她最近總是感冒，嗓子疼，而且還時常感到疲勞和虛弱．請你寫一封e-mail回復她，針對她的身體狀況給出幾點建議：
  1．多喝水，多吃新鮮的蔬菜和水果，飲食均衡；
  2．要有充足的睡眠，加強鍛煉，并邀請她周末去爬山；
  3．保持好的心情．
要求：1．描述要有條理    2．書寫工整，卷面整潔      3.80詞左右
Dear Mary，
  I'm so sorry that you are not feeling well these days．
                                                  
Yours，
Lily．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①To recover soon，remember to drink a lot water and eat plenty of vegetable and fruits，②which will be  good for  you為了很快的恢復，記得多喝水，多吃水果蔬菜，這些對你有益處．
①動詞不定式表目的，做目的狀語．
②which 引導的非限制性定語從句．
【高分句型二】
①When you getting better，taking exercise is a good choice ②because it can strenghthen you body當你更好點，鍛煉是一個好的選擇，因為能增強你的體質(zhì)．
①when引導的時間狀語從句．
②because引導的原因狀語從句．

解答 Dear Mary，
I'm sorry to hear that you've caught a cold．I hope you're getting better now．
To recover soon，remember to drink a lot water and eat plenty of vegetable and fruits，which will be  good for  you．【高分句型一】You should keep the eating balance（多喝水，多吃新鮮的蔬菜和水果，飲食均衡）Besides，you should try to stay in a good mood as well as get enough sleep．When you getting better，taking exercise is a good choice because it can strenghthen you body．【高分句型二】So let's go to climb the mountain this weekend，shall we？（要有充足的睡眠，加強鍛煉，并邀請她周末去爬山；保持好的心情；）
I am looking forward to hear from you soon．
Sincerly yours，
Lily

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