Question

關(guān)于減壓提建議

Answer 1

Now many students are under too much pressure. They always feel too tired to listen to teachers carefully in class.
It’s important for students to relax. Here are some different ways to relax themselves. For example, they can try to have enough sleep, or they can listen to their favorite music after class. They can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends after school.
While you are studying, don’t forget to relax yourself. In this way, you will be healthy and study better.

試題分析：這是一篇話(huà)題作文。要求根據(jù)許多學(xué)生因?yàn)閴毫�過(guò)大，談?wù)劀p壓的幾點(diǎn)建議。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見(jiàn)好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語(yǔ)，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。