Question

中國(guó)自古是禮儀之邦，樂(lè)于助人是我們的傳統(tǒng)美德。工作、學(xué)習(xí)和生活中的互幫互助能使我們感覺(jué)到溫暖，使我們彼此都能更輕松地面對(duì)人生的各種難題。請(qǐng)以“幫助他人”為主題寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 簡(jiǎn)單表達(dá)你對(duì)這件事的看法。
2. 講述一個(gè)你幫助別人或受到幫助的經(jīng)歷。
3. 幫助人或被幫助后的感受是什么？
4.呼吁大家傳承樂(lè)于助人的傳統(tǒng)美德。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。
2.語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。
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Answer 1

Be Ready to Help Others
One can't do all the jobs and complete all the things by himself,and a cooperation and a help are needed. Looking back, we can knowthe history of human beings is a history of helping each other. Firstly,helping others is essential,as one's ability is limited and can't finish everything.We needs a help in order to do the thing well.Secondly,to help others means to help ourselves.We can't live in a single world.When we help others in trouble someday, they will do us a favor in return.On the contrary, if we don't offer a help,we won't get a help,Finally,helping others is not only a good quality,but also a happy thing.We can get much happiness by helping others.Friends,don't grudge your love or help,for helping others is just helping yourselves

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的話題作文。主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不僅注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如Looking bac,Firstly,Secondly,Finally,not onlybut also,等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。